Taylor Hillridge is a 17 year old girl with two best friends. On her 18th birthday, her mom bought her a laptop so she could chat with her friends on a website. Her brother, Eric hacked her account and changed her status and now she gets bullied by everyone. A bully from her school named Lily made a embarrassing video of Taylor and everyone in the school seen it. She was so embarrassed that she posted a video of herself saying that she will stop trying. She tried to commit suicide until her friend Samantha went to her house and stopped her....
I felt crushed that everyone was bulling her and her friends just ditched her! When Taylor tried to commit suicide I felt so sad for her. I've been bullied before but when i saw this movie i was shocked that she wanted to kill herself after she watched that video. Cyberbullying is very dangerous and when it goes too far people kill them self...
5 Comments
11/22/2016 11:13:05 am
Excellent job summarizing the movie for us! You pointed out the highlights of the cruel deeds done by bullys- the main points. Next time focus more on what you thought or felt. What did you think or feel about the movie?
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logen
12/4/2016 03:23:38 pm
I loved how you got super detailed. (well not super detailed but detailed enough to let us know what your talking about.) but like what Raylene said I think you should put more of your own feeling in your writing. anyway around you did an epic job!!
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12/21/2016 09:42:31 pm
Wow that is very detailed and interesting but I think there was a typo or it was just me.It said "On her 187Th Birthday".I know anyone can make a mistake.
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Nadira
12/22/2016 06:49:14 pm
Yea, I accidentally wrote 187th instead of 18th.... Thanks for telling me Aryan!
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Sania
1/11/2017 03:04:07 pm
You could have made it more detailed but other then that the grammar was all good. Good job
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